Torrent is the third book in the River of Time Series and it
begins with not only Lia, Gabi, and their mom returning to medieval Italy, but
their father as well. And once again the disbelief lasts for less than an hour
and he’s already using swords to take out enemies. I’m sorry but if time travel
did happen in real life, and you were given ten minutes of heads up about it, I
really think it would take you more than thirty minutes to understand that it’s
“really” happening. Sigh.
Here’s where I’m going to get a little spoilery about things
so watch out. One of the twists I did not see coming was when Gabi was
basically kidnapped and was told she could either face torture or marry Lord
Greco, who we had read about earlier in the series. She spends the whole time
with him trying to decide if he’s really on her side or not, and wondering if
he’s in love with her and *boom* she kind of starts to fall for him as well.
But not really because she knows how much she really loves Marcello. This, of
course, leads to confusion when she’s finally returned to Marcello later on.
The other plot point I have issue with is the decision to
stay and live in medieval Italy. Yes, Gabi is in love with Marcello and Lia is
on her way to falling for Luca, but their other reason for staying, because
they’re not sure their dad will survive if they go to the present time since he
had died in their recent past. But we already know that when they do time
travel the group has to go to the “present” before they can go back again.
Which means after they picked up their father they would have been in the “present”
for at least a few seconds. Their father obviously didn’t die so that argument
is invalid.
And the conversation about what happens if the plague starts
and affects them…oh dear. Marcello and Gabi agree that if one of her family
members comes down with the plague they will go back through the tunnel and to
the present. And everyone agrees! You know even though there’s going to be a
possibility that Gabi will be pregnant or have children by the time that
happens. They don’t even think about that even though the conversation happens
just days before Marcello and Gabi’s wedding. If you were going with a
realistic family conversation (and that’s what I expect even if it’s somewhat
of a fantasy story) then things like that would have come up.
So although this book was interesting at points, and there
were even some surprising bits, I didn’t think that it was anything super new
or fresh.
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