This book is about Olivia,
whose mother has been accused of murdering her best friend. Then she is
visited by his ghost and starts to realize that her maybe her mother
didn't really do it.
I have read several other YA books like this
in the past few years. Books where a teen was murdered and their best
friend is the one who has to figure out who really did it. And yes the
mystery aspect was pretty good (I didn't suspect the real murderer until
about 20 pages before Olivia did). I liked the whole addition of
Olivia's mother being schizophrenic and Olivia's sudden color blindness
because it made me wonder how reliable the narrator was. (Was she really
seeing ghosts and going color blind or was she slowly starting to go
crazy?)
So even though I've read similar stories it was an
interesting read except for one small thing. It really needed a bit more
editing or a different description for a few scenes. Like where Olivia
lifts a piano lid but then says it had been left open ever since it had
been put in storage. And that was important because when she closes it a
clue fell out...which couldn't have happened if the lid had been closed
and then opened. And then at the end of the chapter the piano was still
open...but how is that possible if Olivia closed it and a clue fell
out?
(After some research maybe the scene did make sense if the
first reference was to the keyboard lid and the second was to the actual
lid but to someone who has never played a piano and hasn't seen one in
years that was really confusing.) That scene needed more
clarification...exactly which lid was she opening/closing each time? But
if that wasn't continuity there was at least one, if not more,
instances of it.
So all in all it was a good book and kept my
attention but I think it could have used another proofreader or at least
have some clarification for that confusing piano scene.
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